my inklings review

appu, you have a beautiful mind. i mean i knew you had a good mind, but now i can say with "inklings" as proof that it is what people call a beautiful mind.

if i was gonna write a mail about it, i was gonna do it proprly, better late than never :P

now i'd already told you, "who wrote the rules" was fabulous! simply so! the fucking rules ;-)

"And the sensibility of daylight would make
tonight's words sound as stupid an attempt at humor as a hyena's laugh"
"Why was she stuck in his head like an addictive soundtrack that refused to change?"

excellent! simply excellent! you seem to have an excellent grasp of the psyche of both men and women and that shows in the stories of romance. these lines could not have been written without perfect imagniation!

the revolt of the coconut trees was a very humorous way to put a simple principle in perspective. the credits was just laughwreck!

the stories are perfectly positioned to help the reader imagine, it's a photograph or a scene or a short film

Venus - again the romance aspect has been done beautifully and has come out very naturally, it captures the tension really well. credits again was genius. i somehow felt this was a lot of you, while reading i thought this was from real life, but then that's maybe cos i know u :P

"in a new light" - yes, background noise is a lot like that, isn't it, jarring at times, and blurred at times

"cheekY" - i swear who doesn't feel the same way, some people just have awesome cheeks, i mean u look at their face and it's nothing but cheeks

"always" - tell me the guitar was classic acoustic :P

greenie - excellent name. for once i thought it ended at "Greenie was born in a cauliflower farm.." but i imagined kids in standard 3-4 are people really old enough then to have the boy girl prejudice

crash and die - again i could follow the movement and paint the picture so easily, beautifully done, nice ending

oil on a canvas was also great, that seemed like a great painting.


now, that was just bits and pieces. absolutely loved it, tell me you're coming out with a novel soon, all you need now is some mythology :P dude, on a serious note, ok somewhat serious here, continue this, it's awesome!